Once Max was
in his room. Suddenly the garage door
opened. He went downstairs to ask why
and who was going out. “Haven’t you
heard?” said Ryan. “Kiana and Max and
Lily were going on a date. Max, guess
what! You’re a Webkinz, so I can log you
on the website.”
Max was
curious and excited. Then Ryan went to
his room. He got a tag from beside his
lego shelf and it was just from the box he came in. Then Max saw it had some weird numbers and
letters. “What does that say?” he asked.
“It’s not a
word,” said Ryan. “It’s a code so you
can log onto your character.” Then Max
saw Miss Birdy for the first time. After
that, they went to the doctor. Dr. Quack
tapped his knee with a tiny hammer. It
made lots of sound effects ~DOINK~ ~Boing~ ~Crash~! On the computer, he whimpered. “Don’t worry,” said Dr. Quack. “You have great reflexes. You could go bowling! Tee hee hee!”
Then they
got to explore the map. Just then, the
map disappeared. It said on the computer
that the Busy Beavers have been building, so you could build your own Kinzville. Then Max decided where everything should
go. He had a comfortable room and lots
of things to hover him around in without even walking. Just then, the door came open. Then Max decided that was enough of Webkinz
but then he decided he’d better log out.
Just then
when they logged out, three awesome carnival games showed up! “Wow! I didn’t know you had to play games to log
out!” Max exclaimed. Then it was Kiana’s
turn. Kiana loved Webkinz even better
than Club Penguin.
THE END
Nice stories, Ryan! Lots of description and adventure!!
ReplyDeleteThank you! Max is a Webkinz!
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